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She stands silently, in a haze of confusion and respite,
Her mind as fragile as glass.
A single thought is as good as a hammer,
Shattering her delicate state of being.

A doubtful force strikes.
And Her world comes crashing to the ground.

Shards embed themselves deep within the wounds of her heart and the pain sears.
The jagged glass begins to unpick the stitches that have held her tattered chambers for so long.

Colapsing on the floor,
She sobs a silent song,
Hiding her face within her hands.
Cheeks burn as she curses her own foolhardy nature.

Trembling hands reach for the decietful mask once more,
Cold fingers grasping the edges,
No longer feeling the pain.

She places her new self upon the old,
And seals it with a burning mistrust.
Whispering to them both,
Never Again.
©2009 ~saroradepp
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Author's Comments

Ta da? Havent done one in a while. Keeping with the theme. Thought my character needed a bit more added to her story.
Saying that, ive done her a bad service. Not really happy with the wording. Ive chopped and changed it about 10 times

Edit: thankyou to toomanyducks for help with the wording :)

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Very good. And lovely wording.

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You build your dreams on my shattered hopes.
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Thanx :)

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"If i had my mouth, i would bite. If i had my Liberty, i would do my likeing. In the mean time let me be all that i am, and seek not to alter me"
-Don John- Much ado about nothing

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