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A little girl sits bathed in light
As she opens Santa's gift
A pad of paper meets her sight
She grasps her pencil swift

Try as she might her mind stays blank
Her smile is becoming weak
Santa's gift now seems so rank
Colour drains from rosie cheeks

As I approach with gift in hand
Her eyes begin to shine.
My gift has helped her land
A thought upon lifes golden line

I watch her grasp imagination from my Christmas Gift
A taste of inspiration it seems was the perfect little lift
Sonnet written for sensing winter peotry contest
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angusfk Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Delightful! I love it!
You've got a way with words that I can't seem to find for myself :P
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saroradepp Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
lol, thankyou
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lilmoongodess Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh this is just adorable!! I love how clearly you show the expressions on the little girl's face! :iconplusfav: and best of luck in the contest!!
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saroradepp Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Omg, thank you so much! :D I wasnt expecting anyone to notice it! :D thanx again. This made my day :)
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lilmoongodess Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It was a pleasure to read, you're very welcome :)
cheers!
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